Contract the we will to we'll, it's easier for the readers brain to process and is more real world. Your 4th grade English teacher is not your prospect for this :-)
So tell me.... how pissed were you when you used the magic wand tool, and couldn't get the wallpaper completely out because its the same color as the water ?
Actually I ordered a News clip yesterday from a BioRecovery job we did this weekend. The spot had our truck (big and beautiful) in front of the grocery store where and employee was stabbed several times while outside smoking. I didn't see it but my wife and other here did. They said it was as good as a commercial because during the whole piece didn't change the shot. Stuck right on the truck in front of the store. When we get it we will add it to our website.