It's the subtle differences a pro makes

[Desk Jockey]

I had a idea for a Facebook post image and sent it to Philip (SignAmigo).

He tweaked it and it looks great. A few subtle changes and it makes a huge difference overall.

Mine

His

 

[ruff]

So, did Dan take away your computer privileges, yet?

Looks good.

 

[Desk Jockey]

So, did Dan take away your computer privileges, yet?

Looks good.

Almost.

 

[hogjowl]

Why isn’t there a cactus or sombrero in the picture?

 

[Desk Jockey]

LOL

Maybe...Just maybe...because I designed it. Not you.

 

[hogjowl]

 

[Cleanworks]

Why isn’t there a cactus or sombrero in the picture?

Cause it's not dry yet.

 

[Mikey P]

No consumer is going to understand what the hell its about

 

[BIG WOOD]

No consumer is going to understand what the hell its about

But insurance agents and adjusters will. He just needs to make sure his target marketing on facebook hits those kinds of viewers

 

[Desk Jockey]

No consumer is going to understand what the hell its about

That's the point. This is simply the hook, the text explains more.

 

[Desk Jockey]

But insurance agents and adjusters will. He just needs to make sure his target marketing on facebook hits those kinds of viewers

Our marketing doesn't actually target that group. Our goal is to educate the home and business owner.

Events trigger a need, when that happens we want them to recall why the need us. Not the other guys their insurance provider is trying to force on them

It's a different approach but when you're not the insurance vendor darlings, it's your only alternative.

 

[BIG WOOD]

Our marketing doesn't actually target that group. Our goal is to educate the home and business owner.

Events trigger a need, when that happens we want them to recall why the need us. Not the other guys their insurance provider is trying to force on them

It's a different approach but when you're not the insurance vendor darlings, it's your only alternative.

You certainly know the market more than I do. That's why your nailing all those jobs. I love seeing an independent business like ours kill the franchises. I'm glad I never took that route in the franchise world

 

[Desk Jockey]

I'm glad I never took that route in the franchise world

Its a tough spot for them also. They have to agree to lower rates and jumping through hoops to get the work and then on top of that pay a franchise fee too. Its no picnic for them either.

 

[J Scott W]

Why isn’t there a cactus or sombrero in the picture?

Cactus would not fit a water damage situation. OK maybe the cactus could be hunting for water.

 

[Desk Jockey]

 

[ruff]

The text is too wordy and too technical, Richard. I don't think it works.

Make it shorter, simpler and the benefits easier to understand. A little pizazz may be nice.
The more link which is a "permission" link (they choose to click it) will allow you to give more detailed info for those who want it.

 

[Old Coastie]

“Hidden moisture? We’ll find it.
We use the latest technology to ensure that when it counts, you get the best service from Chavez Restoration.”

 

[Desk Jockey]

thank you sir!

 

[Cleanworks]

“Hidden moisture? We’ll find it.
We use the latest technology to ensure that when it counts, you get the best service from Chavez Restoration.”

Damn, if there's no hidden moisture, one of our techs will pee in the corner when you're not looking.

 

[Desk Jockey]

Yor tech's, not ours!

 

[Old Coastie]

As long as they don’t pee in the vacuum hose. Yikes.