Flyer designs: Commercial
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B&BGaryC
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I wanna change my vote.
I voted for you to shut up and hang yourself because I thought it was funny. But if you actually hanged yourself I would feel really bad.
I think it's a good design, concept may be off a little bit, but who cares?
I heard something like 80% of carpet cleaning business fail in the first 4 years. (At least in my area) Why in the hell would I want to do what everybody else is doing?
Do your own thing and it will probably work out even if it isn't the norm or the "right" thing.
I voted for you to shut up and hang yourself because I thought it was funny. But if you actually hanged yourself I would feel really bad.
I think it's a good design, concept may be off a little bit, but who cares?
I heard something like 80% of carpet cleaning business fail in the first 4 years. (At least in my area) Why in the hell would I want to do what everybody else is doing?
Do your own thing and it will probably work out even if it isn't the norm or the "right" thing.
CarpetQueen
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ummmmm.....
I'm sorry, I have to say I do not like the concept. Too obtuse, too busy, too confusing. Not enough info about your service, your company, what you can do for me. Are you selling me a vacation? Fishing lures? What???? Not enough pictures of your service for me to relate to it and see it in my business or home.
Maybe if the "fishing side" of your card showed a guy or gal scrubbing the floor on their hands and knees and dreaming of fishing, it might appeal to me more. I could relate to that.
Then the other side could be before and after pics, phone number, explanation, etc. Or even a picture of the person who was scrubbing their floors now happily fishing and thinking of my service cleaning the t&g back at their house for them while they are gone fishing.
Just my humble opinion.
Hope this helps!
I'm sorry, I have to say I do not like the concept. Too obtuse, too busy, too confusing. Not enough info about your service, your company, what you can do for me. Are you selling me a vacation? Fishing lures? What???? Not enough pictures of your service for me to relate to it and see it in my business or home.
Maybe if the "fishing side" of your card showed a guy or gal scrubbing the floor on their hands and knees and dreaming of fishing, it might appeal to me more. I could relate to that.
Then the other side could be before and after pics, phone number, explanation, etc. Or even a picture of the person who was scrubbing their floors now happily fishing and thinking of my service cleaning the t&g back at their house for them while they are gone fishing.
Just my humble opinion.
Hope this helps!
Jtuseo
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I agree. The flyer is not good at all. It looks like a vacation , or a fishing flyer. Has nothing to show carpet cleaning.
alazo1
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I love the second one. The first I don't understand...too busy.
Albert
Albert
