Post Card ideas

[hogjowl]

I need help with a bit of content to go on the back of a postcard. I'm looking for a statement that will convey that I am focused on quality over low price. I want it to have a small town craftsmanship tone to it. I'm thinking of something like this:

A Father and Son Cleaning Team You Can Trust

Low priced, high pressure service seems to be the norm these days. When you call a service company, you run the risk of inviting salesmen into your home in the guise of service personnel. AdmiralClean offers an alternative to this by giving you quality service from a Father and Son team of certified cleaners with 26 years on the Prattville and Millbrook area.

Please keep us in mind for your cleaning needs. We're masters of accommodation and GUARANTEE your absolute DELIGHT. Give us a call today at XSS-XXXX or visit us online at WWW.skgitak.com

 

[hogjowl]

Or:

Is quality service dead today?

At AdmiralClean, we don't think so!

There's no reason to accept sub-quality cleaning when a Father and Son cleaning team is located right here in the Tri-County area that has been offering high quality capet and floor cleaning at reasonable rates for over 26 years. We offer quality cleaning of all your floor coverings with a no compromise guarantee.

 

[Desk Jockey]

I like the second and if you wanted to add: No High Pressure Sales From Us!
That would cover your other concern. Is this an EDDM or to your data base?

 

[jcooper]

A Father and Son Cleaning Team You Can Trust
Low priced, high pressure service seems to be the norm these days. When you call a service company, you run the risk of inviting salesmen into your home in the guise of service personnel. AdmiralClean offers an alternative to this by giving you quality service from a Father and Son team of certified cleaners with 26 years on the Prattville and Millbrook area.

Local & Trustworthy Carpet Cleaning.

My family and I are proud to serve the Prattville and Millbrook area for over 26 years.
Ditch the rest of the mombojumbo...

 

[Desk Jockey]

Throw in a picture of you and your son....uumm on second thought maybe just your son.

You can stand behind the truck...out of view!

 

[hogjowl]

I like the second and if you wanted to add: No High Pressure Sales From Us!
That would cover your other concern. Is this an EDDM or to your data base?

It's going to be a general purpose card for me to send out to new Welcome Wagon move in's and as a one time mailer to my customer base.

 

[hogjowl]

How about Chelsea the carpet cleaning dog?

 

[Desk Jockey]

People love pets. Yes I would include her though out your marketing.

 

[hogjowl]

Or:

Is quality service dead today?

At AdmiralClean, we don't think so!

There's no reason to accept sub-quality cleaning when a Father and Son cleaning team is located right here in the Tri-County area that has been offering high quality capet and floor cleaning at reasonable rates for over 26 years. We offer quality cleaning of all your floor coverings with a no compromise guarantee.

Yeah, know what you mean. Complimentary wording is not my strong suit.

 

[Shorty]

I personally would not put the pic of Chelsea on the post card.

People may love pets, but they may also think that Chelsea could be inside their home when you clean the carpets & leave her own "welcome" package.

I also like the second post & what JC has added.

Just my thoughts.

 

[TomKing]

Family owned for 25 years.
Just go with the facts. how long you have been in business and you are not a franchise.

 

[Shane Deubell]

What's on the front?

 

[Mark Saiger]

Pictures, fewest words possible....people are in a hurry, that's why they tend to call us....

Picture of you and the son so they start to get to know him.

As Richard said, use the dog in your branding if it's something you consider pursuing....

Kid's and Pets, a profit waiting to happen....

 

[Shane Deubell]

Yeah i went lighter this time also.

 

[hogjowl]

That's a little too busy for me.

 

[Shane Deubell]

I dont speak pig latin, sorry.

 

[Mikey P]

"Admirals Carpet Care.

The only white carpet cleaner in all of Pratville.

Black son available upon request."

 

[Connor]

"Admirals Carpet Care.

The only white carpet cleaner in all of Pratville.

Black son available upon request."

*connOr refrains from comment and laughs to himself.

 

[Willy P]

How about Chelsea the carpet cleaning dog?

More chins than a Chinese phone book............

 

[Shorty]

More chins than a Chinese phone book............

I like that............................... sick bastard.

 

[Desk Jockey]

More chins than a Chinese phone book............

The dog or the pig?

 

[Willy P]

The dog or the pig?

Yes

 

[hogjowl]

assholes

 

[Desk Jockey]

 

[Shane Deubell]

assholes

Get out of your own way marty, spend the lousy $100 and hire a designer.

 

[mirf]

"Old Fashion Customer Service"

 

[ruff]

How bout this here Marty. Short, honest and to the point:

You ain't no Lemming
So don't follow the herd and use a franchise.
Be brave, be subtle.

Martin Sutley here, will treat you
just like..... you're family
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[hogjowl]

Being treated like family has a couple of different meanings down here.

 

[Becker]

Yeah i went lighter this time also.

whats on the otherside shane?

 

[TomKing]

That's a little too busy for me.

Are you kidding me that is a awesome card!!!!!!!

Clean bold, sets his service apart, warranty and value.

Lets see the front!!! Fantastic better than 90% of the stuff posted on this site.

My stuff should be that clean but I am hack and do it myself.