Mikey's new site

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  1. FredC
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    Not quite ready.

    Critiques, suggestions, mistakes, display issues?

    http://fredtesting.com

    Yes click to call works....don't be harassing Moekneekwa
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    Looks good on the mobile app, but Javier’s eyebrows really scare me.
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    Clicking on Carpet Protector and Commercial Carpet Cleaning the page didn't move up. Desktop Mac. Looks good.
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  4. FredC
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    Like a Guy Fawkes/anonymous mask
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    thanks....fixed
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    Who's Cleantec restoration?
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    How about a page or form or links for reviews?
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    There will be a link to the yelp reviews (possible google) under the review slider....there are also links to it elsewhere. If you are viewing on mobile the slider is hidden. There will not be a separate review page

    if you mean to leave them this will serve that purpose too....there are also followup emails to gain reviews.
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    I find that helpful as not everyone has a Yelp account or a Gmail.
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    Helpful for what?

    If I wanted more good reviews on the site I could just write them myself.

    and yes......almost everyone has a yelp or gmail account at this point....especially in this area
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    Not so much here yet. I'm thinking a link to yelp or Google could bypass the need to have an account.
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    Sush..
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    I like the desktop, very clean. Mobile site, not so much. To much scrolling. I dont like that yelp or face book link is right above the logo. Maybe put those in contact us area. I would shorten the our staff that if person wants to read more about it, they can expand it. Looks great on desktop though
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    “Our family ran business has an extremely passionate and educated staff ...”
    Should be “Our family run business ...” not “ran.”


    • Fresh soft hot water rinse to leave your carpet and fabrics looking and feeling like new”
    Huh? How about: “Because our trucks have installed water softening equipment, a Connoisseur cleaning leaves carpet and upholstery looking and feeling wonderful!”
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    When i clicked for the service page on desktop, it is way too noisy. Background pic for each service disorients me. It seem fine on mobile mode but no good on desktop.
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    I personally hate the words "passion" or "passionately" used on a website or in advertising seems too cliche and generic but maybe just grates me.

    I used to automatically bin CV's that came across my desk if they were passionate about there career etc lol
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    Center the read bio button text and use the same color as the other buttons for uniformity.

    I'd add 2 sticky buttons at the bottom of mobile - 1) click to call and 2) quote button that sends them down to your form anchor. That way they're always available and the user doesn't have to scroll all the way back to the top.

    On the scrolling testimonials try to link out with a no-follow link to the actual review, usually I just use the shareable link with the hrid and strip out their tracking data after it(for yelp reviews). I can't 100% prove it but since Yelp displays location with the reviewer it is just another way to improve geo-relevancy. You could create location pages and display reviews for each specific location this way, I've done that as well for multi-location businesses. If you want to get fancy add review schema to them. It's how the big boys like Oxyfresh, COIT and a few others do it.

    Good work as usual Fred, clean and simple.
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    How's about bringing some "up to date" Pictures of Mike? How old is he in those pics?
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    "Their son and daughter now run the day to day portion of business along with two great employees."

    Haven't you got 3 employees not counting son and daughter?
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    On the Stephen Lackey bio change is to his, and within the bio his name is spelled wrong(Stephan)
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